Small head, Big Body, Endless Potentiality
- · I chose to make my image the way I did to show that you should never be ‘big headed’ about anything. I chose to make the shoulders broader for the reason of emphasizing the fact that the head is small. The story relates to the image because even though there is a small head, it shows that there is room for expansion and that there is no reason to be ‘big headed’ and stuck up. They both lend power to each other because the text says there is endless potentiality whereas the image looks limited.
Implicit Bias and Personality Theory
People
tend to believe that personality and bias are irreversible and that they cannot
change, but some seem to believe that it is possible. People make their
personality what they want it to be because of biases and these tend to shape
what we perceive and who we are deep inside. In the NPR Personality Theory
podcast, they went to dive deeper into the wonders of personality and discover
if it possible to change who you are by going deep inside and rewiring the
personality of the person. They say that “we need to believe in a consistency
within us and others”, but yet we still have biases that contradict statements
like this. In the podcast, they went into a prison (correctional facility),
where they talked to an inmate named Dan. In an interview, Dan stated that “it
was easier to be no good”, and this shows that even working with topics that
are rooted deep within a person, there are still choices that can change and
manipulate the outcomes and shape of their personality. The general public has
their own opinions on personality and the reversal and driving motives that can
and will shape the way they think, and this can tag biases into the mix. Biases
can be shaped and molded by the lifestyle and the daily routine of the
individual. The Sports Illustrated article titled “Higher Education”, dove into
the life of a black Amish man in Ohio. It leans on the biases of the people in
the town that had seen him as a stereotypical African American, and less of a
person, even though they hadn’t met him and didn’t know much about him. He
became the coach of the basketball team in their town and many didn’t believe
that he would make a good enough coach, turns out they were wrong and wrong
again. The citizens of the town believed that coach, due to stereotypical
biases, would be a bad influence on their children and that they shouldn’t
associate with him. The reason for the people of the town to give this
assumption of coach is that they used their past experiences and their biases
on him and gave him a bad wrap. But after coach had been in the town for a
while, they began to change their view of him and they altered their biases and
they didn’t think badly of him. This shows that people can change their
personality and their biases, it just takes time to do so. Coach is a person
who was persistent and he didn’t focus on what the citizens of the town thought
of him and kept doing what he was doing and pushed through and he eventually
became a figure of the town. Coach’s personality would come out in the games
that he would be at. In the article, it stated that “coach was too stubborn to
call a time-out” and this shows that coach was persistent and he didn’t back
down from a challenge and he faced these difficulties face to face. Throughout
the article, it showed that people can change their biases and adapt to newer
surroundings. Due to coach being a large part of the town, the mistakes that he
thought he should be “punished” for, the people “pretended” it away. A person’s
personality is the core of who they are and this can transcend into who they
believe they are (i.e. male or female). Some people in different cultures feel
that being someone you don’t resemble is a “disease”, but in reality it's just who
you feel you are. In the NPR podcast: Sissies, it went over how people feel
about someone who is gay. One part in the episode, a man said to his son, who
was gay, that there was a hospital that could “cure” him. Being gay has a
direct correlation towards to your personality because, alike to your
personality, it is who you think you are. This also can connect to being
transgender. People who think they are what they don’t resemble. This is a part
of a person’s personality because it’s who they feel they are.

I like the meaning behind your picture and flash fiction. Also, I like your They Say/I Say and I think you hit some really good key points. The only thing I would suggest is that you would split your They Say/I Say into paragraphs so it would be easier to know where your I Say starts. Overall though I think you did really good with connecting your flash fiction with your picture.
ReplyDeleteThe picture itself is very interesting. I was wondering why you chose to bolden and underline your flash fiction? Is it to create an emphases on the entire thing? If so, you've done a good job at choosing a point of focus and connecting it together. Your one pager is also very good. It flows together well and really shows some of your veiws on the world.
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Claire
I really like the correlation behind your picture. The way you turned a weird looking photo into a cool unique idea of being "big headed" is genius. Noice dude
ReplyDeleteI like your flash fiction, it connects perfect with your picture. It really all ties together I like that. You also have a very good point on your flash fiction and rationale.
ReplyDeleteI like how your story is short and leaves room for a lot of interpretation. Your story and picture math almost perfectly and your explanation for the story really gave a great message. I enjoyed what this piece meant. A huge strength you had in your one pager was the amount of references you used. Not just one article or podcast so the one pager had a lot of information to work with. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYour self portrait and flash fiction have really good messages in them. I agree that a big head can keep you from showing your real potential. Your rationale makes perfect sense too, it does a good job expanding your original message and hiving the reader more insight. Your one pager is great. I love how you used transitions to make the paper flow instead of leaving it in blocks. It makes it a lot easier to read and connect.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion what truly makes this good is the way you portray size this creates a contrast between the idea of what gives a person potential and how just because you have, lets say a bigger head doesn't mean your smarter, good job with that.
ReplyDeleteoverall I think you did very well, you made a lot of good key points. All id say you could do to help the reader out is making your they say into paragraphs so its easier for the reader but that's it! very nice post.
ReplyDelete-- Colton Burtlow
i think you did a good job of correlating your picture with your response. it flows well and gives a good explanation.
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